ScarredShadow, Yautja, 17 years ago

Ok guys This is the first passage/chapter of my story. It is a little boring no action but it will introduce the main characters and what the whole story is about.

Aliens vs Predators
Last Rites
Chapter One: The Mission

14 August 2026
Niobrara Wyoming
Secret Military Installation
Code Name:Area 28-03
Current Mission:Classified

Deep down in the Rockies sits a Top Secret Military base Known as Area 28-03 unknown to the US. The site of the Base is unseen for miles away covered in perfect camouflague. Making his way through the rural areas of Wyoming is Second Lieutenant Michael DeRosa in his H2 Hummer blasting a song,"Its the end of the world as we know it and I feel Fine." DeRosa neared the Military post the guard stopped him. DeRosa hopped out of his truck and saluted,"Second Lieutenant Michael DeRosa United States Marine Core."
The Guard immediately saluted and said,"Yes Lieutenant I apologize to keep you waiting."
"Its not a problem Private its standard procedure anyway." DeRosa assured the guard.
"Thanks Lieutenant." he said in reguard.
"No problem I'll see you around." DeRosa hopped back in his Hummer and rushed himself to the base. DeRosa stopped right before the base He sprinted to the main entrance of the base. He snatched his access card from the pocket of his military jacket. He slipped the card into the security system and entered in the access code: 2803206
Access Confirmed
Michael DeRosa

The Door unlocked and DeRosa entered but was suddenly he became calm. All his worries and fear drained from his mind. "Okay I'm here good, thats a start. He assured himself.
"Hey Man!" SGT. Jack Frost. shouted.
"Holy crap man you scared me!" DeRosa holding his chest he felt like he had a heart attack.
"Sorry about that Lieutenant."Frost apologized.
"Not a problem Frost, where you been? DeRosa asked.
"Oh just away." Frost replied.
yeah on vacation and stuff thats real nice man." DeRosa explained.
Yeah it was good, hey listen man you should go see the Lieutenant I hear he wanted to see you.
Really? DeRosa asked.
"Yes." Frost replied.
DeRosa moved ahead through the main congregation hall where hundreds of marines conversing with one another trying to catch up.

DeRosa came up to the doorway to First Lieutenant Mitchell's office. Mitchell was on his computer reading Frost' and DeRosa's data files. DeRosa saluted to his Lieutenant, You wanted to see me Sir.
"Yes I did." Mitchell shouted in a steady voice.
"Sorry for the interruption Sir but you said you wanted to brief us with a speech." Corporal Jarred Jean Ethers asked.
"Yes I was lets go, we will finish the conversation in a little while." Mitchell elaborated.
BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP, constant beating sounded throughout the entire base. "What the hell is going on!" DeRosa shouted.
I have no clue. Ethers tell one of the scientists from our research center to get his ass over here." Mitchell ordered.
"Yes Sir!"Ethers shouted he then sprinted out of Mitchell's office and migrated toward the research center on the northern sector of the base.
Sir this looks like its some kind of signal what kind of signal and someone stop that god damn beeping!" Mitchell ordered.
Ethers returned with Dr.Khazmar head of the research department. In a matter of seconds the brilliant scientists solved the problem. The beating stopped.
"Thank God." DeRosa said.
Okay there appears to be some sort of signal and satellite distruption.
"Where abouts?" Mitchell asked.
Over LV-862.
What? Mitchell chuckled. We never had anthing over LV-862."
"Well apparently we did," Khazmar responded.
"But how?" Ethers asked.
I don't know I can't get a clear visual but the infered is off the chart, here take a look.
The three Ranking marines followed Dr.Khazmar to the view screen he then changed the settings and everyone saw the red glow taking up almost three quarters of the screen. "What the fuck is going on?" Mitchell shouted he then sat at his desk and searched through his data files. Mitchell found no records of anything on Planet LV-862. Mitchell typed into his computer Current Mission: Unidentified Phenomenon on LV-862.

Then Mitchell along with his squad leaders and their Lead Scientist Dr.Khazmar headed toward the congregation Hall to inform their fellow marines of their new mission. Mitchell stood up on top of a large table with a megaphone. "Good Morning. I know today we were going to brief you and welcome you back. But I regret to inform you we have just found a most unusual discovery. But all of you will have to participate in this mission.
Private Gomez raised his hand. "Yes what is it Gomez?" Mitchell asked.
"Okay I'm getting to that right now. We found satellite distruption above LV-862." Dr.Khazmar left and went back to the office. "Anyway we saw on the infered read out it showed something really large is out there. That is what our mission is we will have to set down on LV-862. We are going to find out whats going on." Khazmar came sprinting out of Mitchell's office with a paper in his hand. "I got it I found something, look at this Lieutenant. Just look at these satellite images Sir." Khazmar asked Mitchell.
He examined the images and asked, what exactly is this. These seem to be space stasis pods. Like escape pods from a ship Sir.
What? Ethers asked.
Okay thats it this is fucked up we are preparing to go immediately. "Attention marines! I want all weapons loading docks and all equipment prepared and ready on 16 August at 06:00. "What Sir?" all the marines laughed in amusememnt.
I expect your work to be done I will be inspecting your work soon." Mitchell announced.
Yes Sir!" all the marines shouted simultaneously.
They then immediately seperated into their designated work stations..

Far out in the Dark void of space a large mass of metal was drifting through the deepest reaches of space. Within moments a short stream of electricity blended the object providing the perfect clamouflague almost like a cloak. Inside the ship lights started to flicker on in an exotic pattern. Onboard this spacecraft a savage species of Hunters that would stop at nothing to seek and claim, the skulls of honorable prey. Standing at the front of the ship was an Elder known as Shivinyon. Standing beside him on stood two thers by the names of Placo Xaxaferon and Placo Blescallix. "Ka'rik'na Sertolic". Placo Xaxaferon made his way to the left corridor to see Sertolic cleaning some of his trophies. Sertlic grouped together some of the Blooded Warriors of their Clan Hunter's Moon. Some of them including Xerax, Guan Thwei, Zenwi Sai, Saint, Yeyinde Nih'koute, Asudak and Diruxis. The pack walked toward their Elder and halted. They bowed their heads to their Elder Shivinyon. The Tyioe-ti have been launched." "Then Shivinyon announced Nain-de Thwei the Hunter's turned to each other and all roared in excitement and triumph.
"Prepare" Shivinyon announced the Hunter's returned to their corridors and started to gear up....

ScarredShadow, Yautja, 17 years ago

Ok I switched the topic name to the title Aliens vs Predators:Last Rites. Just in case anyone didn't know.

Lone_Hunter2, Yautja, 17 years ago

"VERY NICE HIGH FIVE"

XenoHunter, Yautja, 17 years ago

Where does my guy come in,and can he kill the final monsters by kamikazi?By the way his names still stalker.

ScarredShadow, Yautja, 17 years ago

You'll see in the story he will come in because all of the Predators in the clan are going to be fighting.

XenoHunter, Yautja, 17 years ago

Thank you.Am i the only one who suggested a human that was trained by predators?If its yes Woo-Hoo!And that problem with the preds not being able to talk to humans its solved now.Also,is he a main character?And,lastly no one has suggested an android.A traitor maybe........?

ScarredShadow, Yautja, 17 years ago

Yes XenoHunter you were the only one has submitted a human trained by Predators. As for your other suggestion Actually I was going to have a synthetic onboard because I got the idea from Aliens when the guy said we always have synthetic onboard. Also XenoHunter everyones character will have an important role in the story so yeah your character will be a main character.

XenoHunter, Yautja, 17 years ago

Stalker also has the cure to being Facehugged!But only 1!!!!

Saint, Yautja, 17 years ago

Your really getting along there man, good job. Can't wait for my character to do some assassinations lol.

Namicole, Yautja, 17 years ago

hay dude i thought (THOUGHT) you said that i would be in the Third passage? (will not me but Rayne) how come i wasent?

ScarredShadow, Yautja, 17 years ago

You were your supposed to be opening the fourth one because your supposed to be with Devestator and and Venom. If I forgot I will edit it. Sorry about that.

Namicole, Yautja, 17 years ago

no pob dude just was really exicted and i didnt see me i couldent figure out what was happening. i thought you kicked me outa the story or somtin.

ScarredShadow, Yautja, 17 years ago

Let me tell you something you are the alien who emerged from Gomez. Suprise. You are still alpha.

Namicole, Yautja, 17 years ago

wow sweet sweet Alpha ship! thx... although this mean the preds will be after my ass for my skull but oh well come and get me! ( i had some susipcion i was in gomez but then i though that it was one of the other two)

DeathWraith, Yautja, 17 years ago

And since you`re so great as an alien, WHY DON`T YOU CHANGE YOUR DAMN AVATAR BACK TO ALIEN AND STOP ACTING LIKE A TRAITOR ALL OVER AGAIN!?!? You will otherwise lose your sense of humor completely and act like a geek for the rest of your life. You should return to he clan. You are a Shadow Serpent. You are our brother. You shall return. So do it already. Stop acting immature and do something completely right for once. And plus, what else could you do? Will you stand alone? Or join the Hunter`s Moon and hope that everything there is as you`d like it to be for as long as you are here? You`ve already betrayed one clan. This would be the second. Remember Shadow Warrior, he was given even a third chance by Angus, but by noone else. If Hunter`s Moon takes you from need of men, then that is your last chance. After that you may still be able to return to the Shadow serpents if you are not pleased with what that clan offers you. But only because we have such a kind leader. But lucky you... both the leader and the subleader are pretty busy these days and so you have time to think about it. So do just that. Return to the clan, or die trying not to! Remember that even when you were a human i was on your side, even if the former subleader was againt you. If you betray us, few will ever again be on your side here.



Oh and you`re still doing a pretty good job, Scarred, keep it up, and even higher.

Namicole, Yautja, 17 years ago

change my avatar? what do you mean whats it look like to you? and i thought you guys wouldent let me back in sincei had to change my acc. Death if you thought i would join someone BESIDES SS i would have done it long ago? ive said it beforee and ill say it again " if SS wont take me then i wont join Eneywon but i thought you wouldent let me back. so ive been alone.
(P.S. you hated me as a Pred a human and a alien)

could someone tell me whats wrong with my avatar?

ScarredShadow, Yautja, 17 years ago

Hey Hunter's Moon isn't desperate we are just losing a lot of old members. But does this involve me because Rayne yousaid SS and I thinks that one of my nicknames. So what about me is going on lol' I don't know.

Namicole, Yautja, 17 years ago

no we are talkin about Shadow Serpants

ScarredShadow, Yautja, 17 years ago

Oh my bad carry on.

Namicole, Yautja, 17 years ago

lol oh and scarred question im confused you did first passage second passage and third passage but then you did tbe begginng and chapter one. care to explain?