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ScarredShadow, Yautja, 17 years ago

Thanks guys I'm sorry to hear about your losses as well. Let me ask you guys a question. Do you want me to post by chapters or action passages? I know everyone likes the action passages but the chapters give an understanding of the story. The next chapter would be The Departure. But the next action passage will include a fight, the Air Force will be called in a little later.

Kidd, Yautja, 17 years ago

I have been reading your story of late Scarred, and also I am sorry about your friend who just recently passed away. I have recently been to a funeral last week. It was for my boss's twenty-one year old daughter.

I am very intrested in your story and I am wondering if I can submit one character into the story. If it is alright with you.

ScarredShadow, Yautja, 17 years ago

Thank you Kidd and yes you can submit a character for the story. Sorry to hear about your boss' daughter. My friends funeral was today actually. You can submit more than one character. However many you want.

Kidd, Yautja, 17 years ago

Aight. I'm gonna take onme of the characters out of my profile and place him in here.

Name: M. Acardipane
Age: 33
Nationality: American
Height: 6'7"
Weight: 241 lbs
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Blond
Brief BackGround:
Marc Acardipane, also know as,"The Bull," is known for his grunts and groans while waking up after hypersleep, and his growls while barking out orders. A big man, which new recruits look up to, with tales of himself wrestling bulls to the death.

Hope this will do. Tell me what I need to edit so I can help you out here.

ScarredShadow, Yautja, 17 years ago

Thats good just missed two thing his rank and main weapons. Is he a marines or air force.

Kidd, Yautja, 17 years ago

Rank: First Lieutenant
Branch: USCMC Marine
Prefered Weapons: M41A1 Pulse Rifle, M240 Inecinerator Unit, and .50 Desert Eagle.

There you go. I dispies heights, so don't expect any of my characters going airforce. I'll have them go into dropships, but that is it. I am not going to fly. XP

DeathWraith, Yautja, 17 years ago

Hey Scarred, i`d like to know what you thought of my idiotic alien char idea... I mean... i think it`s really not fit for such a story, but i guess i just can`t do fit stuff lol...

ScarredShadow, Yautja, 17 years ago

Wraith I liked your character. I think that the fighting style waiting for a single opponent and then attack will definately fit great with my story. The Xeno history was very detailed, I like it. So I don't think its idiotic, its good.

DeathWraith, Yautja, 17 years ago

Oh well... thanks, but i don`t really like it cos it`s none-canon... But then again... some people hear would have a heart attack if they heard my other non-canon ideas... Well then... can`t wait to see how you fit it in the story...

Lone_Hunter2, Yautja, 17 years ago

As much as I would like to read some more kickass action passages SS I wanna read this by chapters mate I like it when the stories make sense.

predalienking, Yautja, 17 years ago

me to and splaxor have him join the hunt and like sacrifice himself for the last 2 hunters and like the but end of the story in a fight with the alpha or a queen if theres one

Saint, Yautja, 17 years ago

i gotta be honest n tell ya i only ready the action sequences and the story line parts that relate to the predators

Namicole, Yautja, 17 years ago

srry splaxor (i like saying that name) but im de Alpha so ya there is one but i THINK note the THINK im not positive but i THINK that Scarred shadow said i was going to live. i guess you could sacrifice yourself but i dont really think it would be the same. although more meat for me so you can do whatever you wish.

DeathWraith, Yautja, 17 years ago

Hey you know... actually you`ll all do what Scarred wants, it`s his story, it`s not an RPG!!!

Namicole, Yautja, 17 years ago

I only meant that he can suggest whatever he wants to. And see if SS will take it.

Saint, Yautja, 17 years ago

yea just don't try to suggest too much or you may just become ignored

Leandros8, Yautja, 17 years ago

can u put me in here's my characters bio.



Leandros was born premature.his mother and father died in a raid while he was left there sitting there.years later he grew in size teaching himself the youtja ways.eventually at age 11 he was found and adopted by a clan leader.he's been in amany battles he finally earned the rank of blooded hunter at age 13.he is truly the youngest blooded hunter.at age 13 he suddenly disappeared and went to earth.he is now the current defender of mississauga.

Namicole, Yautja, 17 years ago

whens the Next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS TAKING FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!

Namicole, Yautja, 17 years ago

whens the Next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS TAKING FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!

Saint, Yautja, 17 years ago

chill out fool