-Bloo-,
Yautja,
11 years ago
Sorry for the confusion, it's actually two characters speaking. The change is really subtle, and even with the underscores I realized it looks confusing. The first speaker is a captured human, and every time he's speaking, his POV'll be encased in quotation marks. Whenever the Queen is monologue-ing I'll encase it in asterisks.
My reason for including the human character is only so I have an excuse to write out the Queen's fight scenes in the third person without losing "the magic," as it was a giant bitch during LoF to try and stay in character while also being descriptive while fighting someone. Other than that, the human doesn't exist at all and won't become and advantage/disadvantage to any one side.
The human and his group are all trapped in the pyramid, which is shifting like the one in AVP. They're stuck in a room similar to the egg room from that same movie, though they're free to move around the room. The conveyor belt's placing eggs in front of each of them, and the human thinks they're leather party bags. Let's call him Jim from now on.
Later on Jim'll be impregnated, but will live for as long as my Queen does so that he can describe my fights.
If the human's own monologues are distracting, I can keep it to a bare minimum and only have him strictly describe my character's fights.
Edit: Okay, I just reviewed this post and this sounds really confusing, maybe I'll make it more clear next time or just scrap this experiment altogether.