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The Pain of a Hunter

666, Yautja, 17 years ago

Let me know what you think!



Pain. Pain is the one thing that will not leave me. My heart is in pain. My soul is in pain. I am in pain. No amount of pills will help. They come and go, never staying, always leaveing. Why can't I leave? I want freedom! Let me out of this prison of pain! The fire in my soul has died. The wind of hope has stoped helping it and so it has died. The fuel of happyness has been burned up and it too is gone. All that is left is pain, hate, rage, grief, and sorrow. What will happen if I use them? Will my world be incased in darkness? Will this realse me?


Now thinking of more to add. Till next time!


Voltage-3000, Yautja, 17 years ago

YAY

PREDATORv2, Yautja, 17 years ago

This suppost to be related to your character, or are you writing some kind of poem about being a Predator?

Peterson, Yautja, 17 years ago

Sounds good man.

alien-drone, Yautja, 17 years ago

i agree

DeathWraith, Yautja, 17 years ago

Again with the "i agree"... i am facepalming as i type.

x_saysell, Yautja, 17 years ago

Sounds like a suicide letter; saying that though a suicide letter would be spelt better, and have much better grammar.

666, Yautja, 17 years ago

This poem is about a Predator that has lost everything dear to him: honor, the excitement of the hunt, his mate and offspring, his clan, and to have failed them all in what he was doing.

Waralien, Yautja, 17 years ago

Hmm, pretty good.