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XenoHunter, Undefined, 17 years ago

Thanks, this may sound a bit picky, but how long is Lefty going to survive?1 third? 3 fourths? One half? The whole way through?

Jed-Chrizt, Undefined, 17 years ago

We'll just have to find out =]

Venom, Undefined, 17 years ago

Thank you. for accepting venom mate, i hope he does good for the story line, i dont mind if he dies just make sure his last battle will be epic. LOL!

Namicole, Undefined, 17 years ago

Dude! I'm the lead Human! im NEVER NOMBER 1!! IM ALWAYS THE Second in command/side kick ect. THANKS JED THANKS A LOT DUDE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lone_Hunter2, Undefined, 17 years ago

which pred is mine?

ScarredShadow, Undefined, 17 years ago

Thanks for adding Sertolic to your story it sounds like everyone's character in the story is very interesting. Can't wait to hear more of the story. Is Sertolic more of a cameo appearance or is he more of a main character because I read next to the name leader of the first pack is that a main character position or other?

Namicole, Undefined, 17 years ago

i think that's like a first half of the movie your in and the second half your not... so not Cameo but not Main. that is i THINK ( and thing's expklode when i think! o-0)

Jed-Chrizt, Undefined, 17 years ago

Sertolic is one of the main predators in the film.

FireHunter, Undefined, 17 years ago

did you rename mine or am i not in it at all?

Jed-Chrizt, Undefined, 17 years ago

Thanks for telling me, I'll add him in now Fire.

cystic_warrior, Undefined, 17 years ago

Cystic was born in the first brood of the hive. He raised under the command of vampyrik and daveberg, learning everything from them. He stands 7'3 with a very large imposing body frame, witha purple x shaped scar on his head from the previous attack on the hive years ago. He has proven himself time and time again to e as worthy as any number of xenomorphs in combat. His speed, strength, and stamina are admirable.

extra: cystic is a warrior but is colored like the cystic warrior off of avp: extinction

Jed-Chrizt, Undefined, 17 years ago

Update: 1/14/08

Predator submissions are now closed

Three Aliens added
"Cystic" (Warrior)
"Crispy" (Drone)
"FireHunter" (Warrior)

devilpredator88, Undefined, 17 years ago

hey jed um you kinda forgot about lonegash you said he would make a cameo appearence but you did not write it by the way i was hopeing lone gash could be in till the end adnd the group of main characters are fighting the alien queen but the all of a sudden the devilpred appears and everyone wants to fight both of them and lone gash says for everyone to retreat then jed'hin says wait let me help you then lone gash yells "I'm the only one who can take them both! Now get out of hear! hurry!". then everyone runs out of the building and lone gash is cornered when he detonates the bomb on his wrist.next everyone gathers around to honor their fallen comrad but suddenly the devil pred emerges from the rubble and then the final battle begins but only lasts 30 minutes.

Jed-Chrizt, Undefined, 17 years ago

........What?

You realize that I didn't have to include your character and it's out of generosity, I decided to have him make a cameo.

Namicole, Undefined, 17 years ago

That's what i was gonna say. We should all be kissing Jed's Feat right now. And once again I say
you are a PREDATOR NOT A GOD. As long as i dont die REALLY Gay like im fine.

FireHunter, Undefined, 17 years ago

thanks man

delta-boy, Undefined, 17 years ago

hey jed would it be ok if my charachter delta-boy had a flamethrower instead of a m41 pulse rifle i think it would better suit his helmet with gas-mask attachment, and for secondary a small shotgun.it ok if not but just a suggestion that would better suit.

delta-boy, Undefined, 17 years ago

jed is it ok if delta-boy survives to middilsh of story and makes a few kills or gets badly wounded at start(acid maybe) but still fights through to middle and after that is up to u.
p.s ill accept a no from u just glad he in it.

Jed-Chrizt, Undefined, 17 years ago

Whatever fits the story, whether it be death, survival or whatever. Whatever progresses the story, that's what we're aiming for.

Namicole, Undefined, 17 years ago

Ok Progression of story! lol i cant even remember what weapon's Rayne has lol.