badapple24,
Yautja,
12 years ago
Sounds good to me, editing the intro now.
EDIT: It was nightfall on the abandoned colony of LEO 8 and the two suns were just starting to rise. Underneath the colossal colony the Blue hued queen stirs. The chains that held her here were beginning to rust and the queen could sense this. She hissed and with immense strength broke the chains that were holding here all this time. Few xenos in particular Such as the Scarred runner, the black runner, the red runner and the mutated Xeno were following the Blue queen as she made her way to the surface. The largely arid environment provided xenos with warmth. The blue hued queen named “Hei Gui or Bloo” was heading into the jungle and with that here immense hive. The planet was also host to Hunters from the hunter’s moon and was soon to be on the game of honor. One hunter in particular ConcreteHunter paced in the cockpit of the hunter mothership, he growled and got some of his best hunters such as Super and a few others preparing to land on the planet. Concrete growled pacing up and down the row of hunters "Stick together. Don't forget your cloak is useless against them as they sense us anyway. Warn everyone if you're going to self-destruct. Besides that this should be a good clean hunt. The moon is up brothers. Let it begin." The hunters went to the pods and jumped into them. Few bangs were heard and they were off.