Iseijin,
Undefined,
19 years ago
If the humans are caught in the middle (humans have quite an odd habit for putting themselves in the middle of things, don't they?) then the movie should move from the outside/in. Let me explain; if the general idea (or the most popularized one) is the Alien/Predatorian war then it should start with that, that would be the ouside. The inside would be the humans trying to keep them away from where they are to protect themselves. The creatures would need large areas to fight in and the humans would have to try and keep them off those areas for their own safety, or at least trying to herd them away from it. If the Predators want the Aliens, mainly their Queen, then come and get it but you're going to have to duke it out somewhere else. I mean, imagine having humans trying to relocate something as immense and as aggresive as a Queen to another area, or another planet for that matter! It would be like a small oxymoron to the humans negative relationship with Aliens. Instead of the humans trying to kill her, they have to protect her long enough to keep the Predators' focus on her and not on the humans.
I see the link to your script, I'll read it and see what I think of it. Don't worry, authors are creatures whose gears of creativity are greased with words of helpful criticisim so you'll recieve no flames from me.
PS - No offense taken Dachande, I too think the Harry Potter movies were an absolute disappointment.
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