There will be situations like these where there's a great expanse of time between one post and another. Remember that we all live in different time zones, some more extended than others, and pace can be slowed. This - right here - is a good chance to practice 'solo' posting; this means you can focus more on the environment and sentiments of your character. Use these questions as practice for a 'solo' post:
Details like these add more depth and life to a post because it's not always about what your character does, but how they react in the world around them. |
Nope, haven't seen Jesse. Would be fun to have him, though. Bloodstriker, if you don't mind I'll give you some help on how to improve your posting so that others can understand it better. This is not nit-picking, this is for reference and practice so if you don't care for the help in the future just tell me so and I'll stop. Remember, we cannot see what you see. You have a mental picture in mind of what's happening, but the rest of us cannot see that so you'll have to be specific on certain details so we're all on the same page and can react accordingly. It's the same scenario as having a blind friend and you're trying to tell him about a movie. As night was falling on arcadia 1176 bloodstriker was curiously watching two serpents walk through the brush...
...he hesitated to give his postition he settled for going ahead a bit and setting up a torch and a spear trap he even set up a few laser mines.
He then planted a camera to watch the action he then jumped a few miles away(like 3)and turned on his wristcomp to watch the fun unroll.
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