AHHHH,your making me blush.my guy was made to look like the best.you made me look awesome,thanks man your awesome.
as for the others who died,one day we'll look back on them and laugh.*walks a few paces and turns**silent pause*HAHAHAHAHA!

That was AWSOME!!!! keep it up dude!

SAWEET!Hey by the way i forgot to inform you.can i make it so in my story they accidentally go in an alternate universe and end up wirh you guys.if you don't like it that's ok.ill change it.

the other universe thing sounds realyly counfusing. You both would have to overview the chapters toghther ect. It would be better if you stayed with yours and he stayed with his.

It be really confusing. Especially the part I have coming up. By the way expect the next chapters to come soon. I needed to do a few editing pieces.

Just keeping this alive, comment on what you think so far.

Ok sorry to keep everyone waiting heres the next chapter.

Alien vs. Predator: Annihilation

Chapter 14: The Chamber

His breath exploding from his chest, Roger supported on his shoulder, Valdez led his team down the winding passage. They had just escape from the alien ambush on the Preds. While the aliens focused their attention on the Preds, Valdez took the chance to lead his team away from the commotion. But he never expected the aliens to swarm like that.
They came from everywhere. They dropped from the ceiling, swarmed out of tunnels. His team barely managed to survive the swarming let alone the impact of all those Xenomorphs. As they moved through the tunnel, the screeching of the Xenos faded as they descended levels. At first they thought that they had succeeded in eliminating their prey. Then a screeching told them other wise. The sounded came from the chamber they had just left from.
Minutes passed as they continued on their path. They did not run into anyone or thing.
“It seems that the aliens are mounting a final defense for whatever they’re serving.†Alex spoke sometime afterward.
Indeed they did not encounter any problems on the way. This worried Valdez who wasn’t used to easy traveling.
“Everyone stay alert. We could be ambushed at any moment.†He ordered.
The surviving members clutched their weapons tightly, Roger his pistol as he was supported by Valdez. They continued until they saw that they were coming into a clearing of sorts.
The room was very large a strangely familiar. The resin was thick along the walls, ceilings, and floor. But the main difference between this chamber and the others they had passed was that this chamber was clear of bodies. Although there were eggs everywhere, there wasn’t a single body around.
“Well this is strange,†Alex spoke after taking his fill of the area.
“It is,†replied Ana.
Odd sounds from behind made them jump a very odd clicking sound. They turned to stare in the face of a rather large, rather angry looking Predalien. Its eyeless gaze, set on them, anticipating their movements. Its teeth were bearing. It shifted its head from one person to another. A marine began lifting his pulse rifle. The creature saw this and shifted its attention towards him. It moved closer to the marine. Its face just inches from the marine’s face.
The marine began trembling. The creature’s horrid breath wafted over him.
Valdez began whispering, “Don’t move,†to the frightened marine.
It continued its interrogation of them another few minutes. The marine it stood before jerked slightly causing the Predalien to send its tail into the marine’s stomach. He coughed out blood as the tail pierced through his body. It then rounded on him again, this time for the helpless marines’ head. Alex took the chance and fired his weapon.
The Predalien surprised at its new attacker threw the marine off its tail and retreated a little. Valdez, with Roger, could do nothing except back off and find a spot to protect Roger. Ana joined Alex in his attack and allowed Valdez to find a suitable spot for Roger. Luckily the Predalien threw the marine in their direction so Valdez could scavenge for ammo.
Finding some he left Roger to join Alex and Ana only to find that they had driven the creature away.
“What happened?†he asked as they approached.
“It left, another screech caught its attention and it ran.†Alex replied kneeling on the floor.
“Well lets take this opportunity to rest up a bit.†He said while kneeling as well.
As he knelt Valdez realized that that was their last able marine. All that was left was Ana, Roger, Alex, and himself. How were they going to defeat what ever it was that lay ahead? And for the hunters, well lady luck should be with them if they had made it this far. As he was thinking, his eyes began to wander. The room looked strangely familiar. Almost if he had seen it not too long ago…
He then bolted up, “Everyone don’t you recognize this place?†he shouted.
Each of them took a gander at their surroundings. Finally it hit them. They were it the place where the creatures had first been released. The same chamber where the Queen was and had caused all this chaos.
Roger then noticed a door way off to their left and pointed toward it. Valdez then shouldered Roger, again, and led the way to the door. As they walked Ana couldn’t help but feel as though they were being followed. The door way led to some stairs that led to another room only on a higher floor.
Below them showed a horrific sight. A single Queen was suspended by many strands of resin webs. An egg sack attached to its rear end was pushing out eggs. Drones below were grabbing these eggs and moving them out of the way to other areas beyond this room. Many warriors were formed in front of a passage, poised to attack. A Predalien stood idly by nursing its bullet wounds, watching the other aliens at work. But what caught their attention was a massive alien standing by the Queen. Its size suggested it was the Alpha alien. Many scars across its domed head showed it had been in conflict before. Then it hit them, this was the massive creature standing in the doorway in the previous room.
Some clattering shifted their attention away from their view. They turned to the doorway expecting to see an alien lurking there. But nothing the opposite wall in the doorway peered back. They continued to look expecting to see something, never noticing the distorted figures silently running by….

AWSOME chapter! (wait how are they the only able Marines? Did i get killed or somthing cus last i new i was with the Marines. then suddenlly im gone.)

Huh? I don't mean to sound rude but I never remembered putting you in the story.

aybe im getting you and Leondros confused SO MANY STORIES!!! (dont worry dude ive been called worse)

Here it is, the long awaited Chapter 15, enjoy:

Alien vs. Predator: Annihilation

Chapter 15: The Escape

“Well now what?†Ana asked while staring for a full minute at the swarming mass below.
“I don’t know.†Valdez replied.
Below their position hundreds upon hundreds of Xenomorphs swarmed around, all prepared to defend their Queen who was centered in the thick of them. The Alpha alien over saw the rest making small hisses and screeches at nearby aliens. This moment of peace was disturbing. The aliens seemed almost at peace within their hive. Off to the side human hosts, suspend in resin webbing, laid ready for potential huggers. Suddenly one of the hosts began to jerk violently. He repeatedly jerked his chest outwards coughing out blood ever time he did. Then a bone crunching sound echoed in the hive. A creature peered out with its eyeless head examining its surroundings. A nearby Drone approached the creature and helped remove it from its host. It left the body for the caretakers to clean up.
“Disgusting,†Ana whispered as the caretakers took down the body and began feeding the remains to the Queen and young Xenomorphs.
“Ok I had enough, let’s find this shuttle and get off this place.†Roger said turning over and sitting up.
The rest agreed and heaved him up. The made their way to another passage and found themselves in a hanger. The hanger housed a thermal nuclear reactor in a far corner, some ship repair parts, and…
“Look there it is.†Alex said pointing at a horrid looking vessel.
The ship looked as if hadn’t been used in a while. Several of the engines were undergoing their final repairs before some unknown force stopped the workers.
Valdez and the others made their way to the ship with out many problems. Once they got to the main door of the ship, Valdez began giving orders.
“Roger, get a system check going in the main cockpit. Ana finish those repairs so we may take off. Alex, look around and find any supplies and begin loading them.â€Â
“What will you be doing?†Ana had asked.
“I’m going to set some charges up on those reactors. With any luck the explosion will destroy this entire colony and kill every fucking one of those creatures.†He replied back.
Valdez left with out another word to the generators. Roger, with some difficulty, reached the cockpit and started the system check. Ana began finishing the repairs on the engines. Alex found a storage room and brought back much needed supplies including some motion trackers left behind after the creature’s first raid on the colony.
The generators were located on the floor below them, so he took some stairs, he found, down. Once he finally got down he headed straight for the generators.
“Hey, heads up!†shouted Alex.
He dropped down one of the motion trackers he found to Valdez. He caught it and then activated it. It showed no signs of disturbance. He immediately set off to work. He placed the motion tracker and rifle down and began working on the generators. He pulled out charges from his combat webbing and placed them carefully on several of the generators.
Back at the ship Ana finished the repair and told Roger to do another system check.
“All green,†he called back.
Alex, found a Power loader and was loading the supplies he had found. One by one he stacked containers into the ship. One particular container was off balance but he passed it off as a packaging shift inside the container.
Suddenly Valdez’s motion tracker went berserk. He picked off the ground and checked it. It read several large groups moving to their location. He dropped his combat webbing, picked up his rifle and bolted up the stairs he came down from. As soon as he cleared the stairs, screeching and hissing could be heard.
“Alex,†Valdez shouted.
“I know,†replied Alex. He was out of breath, apparently running to get back to the ship.
Suddenly a Predator and the Alpha Xeno burst through the door way locked in combat. The Xeno had many fresh cuts and stabs in its body. The Predator’s wrist blades were completely melted away. Below their level, many more Predators were fighting their own battles. A Predator supporting twin blazers was scorching the ground. Xeno bodies lay burnt and charred. Another was using its spear and bashing a handful of oncoming Xenos. Many more were joining the fray from door ways that the Xenos busted through.
“What in the world happened?†Alex shouted firing out a round at some Xenos that took aim at them.
Indeed what had happen Valdez began thinking while firing at some Xenos flanking their rear.
The massive Alpha and the Predator both got to their feet circling each other. Valdez looked closer at the Predator. It had incredibly serious burns on its hand. Just then the Alpha rushed him. The Predator side stepped just in time and grabbed the tail. It then swung it once before releasing it sending it flying into some cargo. The Alpha recovered quickly and with its tail sent the cargo flying at the Predator. The Predator blocked the flying debris with his hands. He then moved his hands only to see the Alpha feet away. It swung it’s outstretch arm and hit the Predator straight in the stomach. The force sent the Predator flying off the second level. He fell on to some crates piled below. The Alpha then turned its attention to the marines on the same level as it. It screeched and rushed them.
Alex just barely let a grenade fire from its launcher as it approached. The flying projectile exploded, feet from where Valdez and Alex stood. The force sent them over the railing; the Alpha was sent flying back. Alex and Valdez wrenched their hands on the sides of the railing and were left dangling over the chaos that ensued below.
Valdez avoided looking down, but Alex was helpless as he looked down and saw the carnage. Dozens upon dozens of Xeno morphs launched themselves at their prey.
Valdez managed to get himself up and rushed to Alex’s side. He pulled him up with little difficulty. Once he got him back to the walk way he and Alex ran back to the ship. Ana was lobbing the last of her grenades over the railing and into the mass of Xenomorphs. The explosions shook the walkway a little.
“Time to go.†He said filling into the ship. Alex followed afterward along with Ana.
“Aha shit, I forgot the detonator.†He said opening the door and marching outside.
“Wait you’ll never make it.†Alex called after him.
Too late, Valdez ran down the stairs and out of sight. As he ran Valdez had a million thoughts going through his mind. But the one that kept coming back was the thought of the survival of his teammates.

Intresting, I'm looking foward to more.

cool dude. But what ever happened to roger? i liked him.

good job, i think it is a very well written story. keep up the good work i look forward to hearing more. very nice indeed.

Thanxs for the responses. And for roger, remember he's doing a system check and he is in no condition to fight anymore after his duel with the pred.
More to come soon, be sure to check back every once and while to see new chapters.

Here it is the next enstallment of the story.
Chapter 16, enjoy:

Alien vs. Predator: Annihilation

Chapter 16: Redemption

Ravage looked back up at the ceiling. The pain in his body and along his back told him that he was not yet dead. He wished he were. He turned his head slightly to see a sharp object trusted through his arm. His neon colored blood oozed slowly out and onto the containers giving them an eerie glow in the hangar.
As lay there his clansmen’s battle cries rang through the area. He wished he could join them. But not after what had happen moments before. He slowly drifted in and out of consciousness. He struggled to remember what had happen before. It all seemed to be a distant memory to him.
He and his remaining clan stalked the humans. They were certain that if they followed the humans, it would lead them to the hive center. They were ready to end this game once and for all.
Once they came out of a tunnel, they noticed humans were lying on the floor. Were they dead? No, they simply lay on the ground to see the hive center below. As he and his clansmen passed, Ravage took a look over the railing and saw the enormous mass of Xenomorphs.
In the center of it all was the queen. This is what he and his ally were sent here for. This was going to be the battle to end it all. He then noticed a rather large Xenomorph standing guard next to the queen.
In his head he thought that its skull would make an excellent trophy for his collection. Bayne led the clan down another set of stairs. Just as they had come to the exit, Bayne halted them all.
In a whisper he said, “Let this not be our final resting place. Arm yourselves my brothers, and let our mighty cry instill fear into whatever those creatures call a heart.â€Â
The rest of the clan grunted in agreement. Every single one of them armed themselves with what ever they were carrying. Wrist blades, combi-sticks, scythes, battle blades, and plasma casters were taken out.
“Stay true to each other and we shall prevail.†Ravage whispered as one by one he and his brothers filed into the chamber.
They lined up next to each other prepared to assault the queen. Ravage took a moment to soak up the surrounding. He saw an entrance that the humans took to leave the chamber. He also saw several entrances on their level that probably lead to the same direction as the humans.
After his moment, he readied himself. At the end of a silent countdown he and his clansmen uncloaked themselves. The Xenomorphs turned in surprise at the sight of the newly placed hunters.
Before the Queen could act herself, the Alpha screeched a terrible screech and the surrounding warriors and drones sprang into action. Within seconds the assembled hunters were separated and fighting their own fights. Ravage was fending off several alien warriors. Leandros8 was assaulting the Predalien and was moving to finish it off. Bayne sought the Alpha alien for his prize.
Bayne ran towards the Alpha, ducking and weaving through tails, claws, and other Xenomorphs. The Alpha saw him coming and swiped at him. Bayne jumped the swipe and bashed the Alpha with his staff straight across the face. With a deep thumping sound the Xenomorph crashed to the floor. Bayne followed up with a downward slash with his staff. The Alpha countered the attack by blocking the attack with its tail and sent Bayne flying several feet backward. He quickly jumped back to his feet and was met face-to-face with the Alpha. The Alpha, sneered back at his face as did Bayne.
His nostrils were met with a horrid smell that made him want to puke. He quickly sent his spear up the Alpha’s head. The Alpha jerked backed violently and took the spear with it. Bayne rushed forward and tried to take it on again but the Alpha bashed him away with one swipe of the hand.
Ravage managed to shake off all his attackers and turn his attention to the Alpha screeching in pain. Ravage jumped at the Alpha and landed on its back. He then began to swipe away with his spear at his back. The Alpha finally melted the spear off, and flipped off Ravage. Ravage was knocked onto his back and tried to get up but the Alpha moved first. Its mouth was wide open and it was getting its second mouth ready. Ravage closed his eyes and prepared for the pain of the head bite. But no pain came. He opened his eyes to see Bayne holding back the Alpha’s head. The screeching was growing louder and louder.
“Get up Ravage!†Bayne shouted struggling with the Alpha’s strength.
Ravage got up and prepared to attack the Alpha. But then things took a turn for the worse. The Alpha smacked Ravage across the room. It grabbed Bayne’s arm and threw him forward. Ravage got up only to see a horrific sight. The Alpha pinned down Bayne using its legs. Then its tail sunk deep into Bayne’s stomach. It then lifted Bayne off the ground using its tail and brought it closer. Its mouth opened wide and bit Bayne’s head. It then jerked left and right until Bayne’s head ripped off. Neon blood spurted out from Bayne’s neck gushing all over the Alpha. It spitted out Bayne’s head and threw his body away.
Ravage shook with anger. This anger clouded all his thoughts. He even forgot that he had weapons. Ravage rushed forward catching the Alpha on the stomach. He then followed up with a bone crunching blow to the ribs. The Alpha fell back numb. Ravage then heard another screech. He turned and saw the Queen. Ravage, with out a second thought jumped at the Queen. Landing on the crown, Ravage threw disks cutting the Queen’s support. The Queen along with the egg sack fell to the floor. Ravage turned and jumped down to the head of the Queen. He then grabbed the Queen’s head and pulled it up. Ravage pulled out his chain whip and sliced through the crown, severing the neck of the Queen from the head. The Xenomorphs began to screech. Ravage let out an all might roar over the screeching of the Xenomorphs.
Ravage turned to see the Alpha retreating through an upper floor entrance. No doubt it sought the humans to create another Queen. Ravage wouldn’t allow this.
In one mighty leap, Ravage cleared the level he was on and landed on the landing on the upper floor. He turned just in time to see the Xeno struggling to get its massive size through the door. Ravage charged the Xeno and with success, he pushed it through the door way and into a hall. Although Ravage knew he had the Xeno where he wanted it, he knew that things could turn. He stuffed a sacrificial dagger down his shin guard for later use.
The Xeno pushed back at Ravage knocking him into the opposite wall. The Xeno knew it couldn’t move in its cramped environment so the best it could do was to keep Ravage from delivering a fatal blow.
Ravage pushed back at the Xeno, and the Xeno it return pushed him into the opposite wall. Back and forth they pushed keeping each other from doing any harm to one another.
As they pushed Ravage could smell a familiar odor. It was the human’s odor. They had come to the hanger that the humans left to. It would end here between the Xenomorphs and his clan. One final push from the Xeno sent Ravage and the Alpha into the shocked surprise of the humans. Ravage could hear his brethren driving the rest into the same chamber from far below.
Next thing that happened was a blur to Ravage. He looked to see one of the humans running off into a stairway. He picked himself off and rejoined his comrades in what would be the final fight.

Man this stuff is AWESOME hope u continue to have good luck with this book.

waralien when are you going to post the next chapter?

Hey sorry for not posting a new chapter, I've been in a rut for a few weeks. School has been brutal so I haven't been able to work on a chapter. Please be patient loyal readers I'll work on a chapter as soon as possible.

Again, Im sorry if I haven't posted yet. This week though Im finally free from school so I get to work very soon.