i dont know do you want it to be a chapter book "wich i suggest" or a large comic?

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how many pages are needed to make a book like this





To hunt or to be hunted that is the question..... But aliens will die!!!

chapter book





To hunt or to be hunted that is the question..... But aliens will die!!!

yeah its okay i have like 50 or 60 pred names and everything i have almost 50 pages done





To hunt or to be hunted that is the question..... But aliens will die!!!

Don't worry about anything until you have characters. The fights are not important until then.

death all we have to do is introduce them and then were done we got names so dont worry lol unless hes already done that then never mind lol

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scar how many pages you got? and when your fin could you email me a copy of the whole story? if you dont know my email it's in my profile

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i still have to write some more wat i was saying when im done im going to try to get it published but im almost done.





To hunt or to be hunted that is the question..... But aliens will die!!!

yeah that would be good to show how there are so many aliens





To hunt or to be hunted that is the question..... But aliens will die!!!

maybe for the start to show how the aliens started there you should have marines shooting all around cuz theres preds stalking them then they go into the pyramid and they fall down a shaft to where theres a queen and eggs and be4 the facehuggers get them they send out an sos for reinforcements and then start the rest of the book.


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That passage from the book was quite good scarred, although for example, when a new character is introduced, describe it a little more, like when the aliens came, u could add something like "the creature's jet-black lips curled back revealing it's transleuscent teeth, a long string of slimy drool poured from the creature's mouth & formed a pool beneath it" just offering a suggestion, but still, it's quite good. About ur question earlier about the predator hurling his combistick & hitting a dropship's engine, blowing it up, what would add even more drama to the scene would be if the pred leapt to the top of the pyramid, & did a "Reign of Fire" style leap from the top & slammed his combistick through the ship's winshield mid-air, killing the pilot & causing the ship to crash. Just offering a suggestion, lol.

sounds good





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can you give email me a copy of the full story i want to read it over plz my email is in my preofile.

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i like pyramid of death or since theres more than one pyramids of death!

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yeah or Aliens VS Predator Pyramid of Blood or death or Aliens Vs Predator Code:Death





To hunt or to be hunted that is the question..... But aliens will die!!!

i dont know lol but thats what we have to do before you publish it lol and how about........ aliens vs predator: sands of doom or pyramids of doom

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i have no idea maybe u can help name it





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thanx man





To hunt or to be hunted that is the question..... But aliens will die!!!

by the way what Did you name it?

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man that rocks!!!!!!!!

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